2014年1月GMAT作文机经：校医院VS私立医院

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【原始】

有一个misconception说 university hospital 比 private hospitals 好 但是arguer觉得相反 他说university hospital只雇佣了少于15%的医生 而且少于20%的成功率治疗成功 而且学校医院收入低 医生工资也低 他还说 学校医院的医生不止在那里工作 还有teaching researching和teaching 所以overall quality for care in university hospitals is lower than private hospitals (by:colleen108)

【考古】

V1 是对比大学校医院 和外面私立医院的 作者的结论是- 大学的医院quality of care 没有其他医院那么好。 作者给出的几个理由是：1，大学的医院profit 比外面医院少20%，大学的医生收入比外面医生收入少15%。 2，说大学医院的医生要把他们的时间分成3份 用来讲课，做research 和治病，所以没有外面医生那么全心治疗。

V2 (疑似原题) The following appeared in an article in the health section of a newspaper.“There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals.”

Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

【参考思路】

思路A：1、从一个医院的情况就推广到整个太草率

2、治愈率低可能是因为接受的患者得的病都比较罕见等原因造成的

3、工资低，总体利润低，时间分配给教学都不能一定说明质量差。可能其他福利好，接受的病人少，教学研究有助于进步

思路B：1、首先，医生的人数与质量之间没有必然的因果原因。profit跟质量也无关系。很可能treating price is significantly lower。